Desk Crit IV

Date: Fri 11 Apr 13:10:52 EDT 2008
From: Daisyane Barreto Add To Address Book | This is Spam
Subject: Desk Crit
To: 81bada@uga.edu

Hi Eun Ju,

I really liked your project and how you used a clean and easy-to-use interface. The explanation that you provided in the first lesson about the site navigation was a great idea. It makes things simpler :)!!In general, you did an awesome job with you project and I know that you are still working hard to get everything done. I have only one suggestion for your project so far.

For lesson #5 “Place each lighting instrument”, you could have the following scene: a person sitting on a chair or maybe something similar like you have in lesson 1, displaying all the lights in the right position. Later, the learner would go to another scene, in which s/he would have only the person sitting on the chair in the right position. The learners would need to remember and match the light to its right position. This is just an idea that I had in mind :D!!

Well, I think that’s it for now. You did a fantastic job :)!! And good luck finalizing your project ;)!!

Best,
Daisy

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Desk Crit III

Date: Fri 11 Apr 12:34:28 EDT 2008
From: Daisyane Barreto Add To Address Book | This is Spam
Subject: Desk Crit
To: cjh9123@uga.edu

Hi Jea,

I think you project looks very good and your interface and graphic designs look awesome (I really liked the little doll at beginning :) – so cute! Overall, you did a great job with you project and I know that you are working hard to get it done. I have only a few suggestions for your project so far:

1) I noticed that you have tabs on the top of your program that you will take the user to another page or activity. I think you could add a brief explanation in the first page or on the help section, just to let the learner know what s/he will see or will be doing on those sections.

2) Another thing that I notice is that for your project, you want the learner to be able “to think a loud”. Thus, I think it would be good if you had some sort of tutorial or step-by-step to guide the learner through this process.
Well, I think that’s it for now. You did a great job :)!! And good luck finalizing your project ;)!!

Best,
Daisy

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